Re: Warriors of a New Legacy... RPG

by **Fawnleaf** Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:25 pm

Ravenkit wrote:Lilaceyes was pinned to the ground. "Retreat!" Solidstar yowled, "Retreat!" Lilaceyes escaped Treefoot's clutches and scurried off with the BoulderClan warriors.

"Traitor." Happykit mewed bitterly.

she leaves with boulderclan

by **Sunspark** Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:40 pm

o sry then

by **Fawnleaf** Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:41 pm

's ok

by **Fawnleaf** Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:41 pm

im going to edit her name on d first post...

by **Ravenkit** Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:59 pm

Setting: Wherever Fawnstar and Ravenfeather are

"Fawnstar! Fawnstar" Scarletflare called.

by **Sunspark** Sun Aug 05, 2012 9:51 am

Nightshade walked forward to see what her leader was distracted by. When she saw the 2 dark she-cats and the sad looks on there faces , she felt a flare of anger surge through her and she jumped out of the bushes yowling
"YOU MORN FOR A LONER BUT NOT A CLAN MATE? YOU MORN FOR DISLOYALTY BUT NOT LOYALTY? NIGHTSHADOW IS DEAD AND YOU CARE NOTHING!"
She spat at them in disgust.

by **Fawnleaf** Sun Aug 05, 2012 10:16 am

u weren't there sunspark... And can cats cry?

by **Ravenkit** Mon Aug 06, 2012 11:28 am

Sunspark wrote:Nightshade walked forward to see what her leader was looking at and was distracting her so she didn't know she was there. When she saw the 2 dark she-cats and the tears on Scarletflare and Ravenfeathers face, she felt a flare of anger surge through her and she jumped out of the bushes yowling
"YOU CRY FOR A LONER BUT NOT A CLAN MATE? SHE YELLED YOU CRY FOR DISLOYALTY BUT NOT LOYALTY? NIGHTSHADOW IS DEAD AND YOU CARE NOTHING!"
She spat at them in disgust.

Wait- what? I don't get anything. I see lots of grammar mistakes, where punctuation is missing, and that make this unreadable.

by **Ravenkit** Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:44 pm

Fawnleaf, can you RP? Pretend that Ravenfeather fell asleep behind a bush, you found her, and Scarletflare came, crying, with Fox.

Your activeness color is now red, BTW.

And DarkFlash is taken from the RPG.

by **Fawnleaf** Tue Aug 07, 2012 5:43 pm

but i thought she was in fox's new den....

by **Ravenkit** Tue Aug 07, 2012 10:22 pm

Can you just go with it? You're already on red, although you are one of the most active on the forums. Just say something like, "Hi Scarletflare."

by **Fawnleaf** Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:14 am

i'll just play it lik this:

ravenfeather spent the night in fox's new den
this: Nightshade walked forward to see what her leader was distracted by. When she saw the 2 dark she-cats and the sad looks on there faces , she felt a flare of anger surge through her and she jumped out of the bushes yowling
"YOU FEEL BAD FOR A LONER BUT NOT A CLAN MATE? YOU FEEL SAD FOR DISLOYALTY BUT NOT LOYALTY? NIGHTSHADOW IS DEAD AND YOU CARE NOTHING!"
She spat at them in disgust, never happened
ravenfeather and me met in the forest in between camp and fox's new den
we're talking now

kk?

but i g2g, so i'll do it later

by **Fawnleaf** Wed Aug 08, 2012 2:32 pm

setting: in d forest of crystalclan

Fawnstar stared at Ravenfeather, "I would ask you what you're doing, but I think I know. Are you joining Scarletflare and Fox?"

by **Fawnleaf** Wed Aug 08, 2012 2:33 pm

adios!

by **Ravenkit** Wed Aug 08, 2012 9:41 pm

Ravenfeather stared into her leader's eyes, about to say something. Then, right behind her, Scarletflare and Fox appeared. Wait- Fox? Fox? "Fox!" Her thoughts became words as she saw the dead cat.

by **Sunspark** Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:06 am

Nightshade saw her leader step forward and began talking to someone then she heard silence. She stalkde up to the bush and saw Ravenfeather and Fawnstar looking at something. She quietly stepped out and mewed
"Fawnstar?"

by **Fawnleaf** Thu Aug 09, 2012 9:51 am

um sunspark as above, i said that that never happened. mostly because that never happenes in real stuff, and we've done alot of that kind of stuff in previous storylines

by **Ravenkit** Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:08 am

Yup yup yuperoonie!

by **Fawnleaf** Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:11 am

i said stuff in that alot

by **Sunspark** Thu Aug 09, 2012 3:14 pm

no offense but you guys r so rude to me. I mean fawn won't response to my other post where Snowtrot is trying to talk to Treefoot and this one you are just telling me it didn't happen. let me say this slowly and calmly...
YOU GUYS ARE LEAVEING ME OUT ON PURPUSE

by **Fawnleaf** Thu Aug 09, 2012 8:17 pm

as for the treefoot thing, i forgot, ok? i'm sort of caught up in this line. plus i was in the dirtplace, and u headed to d warriors den.

as for this current line, i said it above, that would never happen in real life or in a real book. it gets confusing when everyone isin every scene.

as for whats happened: how about u weren't at the raven and fawn scene. and i'll talk as treefoot, but u're going hav to move to the dirtplace???

thank ok k?

by **Ravenkit** Fri Aug 10, 2012 11:49 am

Happy- dandy!

by **Sunspark** Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:09 am

by **Fawnleaf** Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:22 am

sure, move to the dirtplace already!!!

by **Sunspark** Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:23 am

ok ok

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