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Post by Ravenkit on Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:21 pm

Well, here it is! The results. I judged differently than your previous one, Fawnleaf. Not revealing my judging rubric.

1st place: Fawnleaf

Comments: Love your story and I believe you have developed your characters well, along with the storyline. There are some improvements to be made, but not much.

Improvements: There is mainly one thing that you need to improve in your story, and that is the interest. Sometimes I find myself wanting to do something else or thinking about another thing while reading your story. You have to put a little more excitement at certain parts.

Overall Opinion/Score: I loved your story, plot, and characters. Even though I lost interest in it a little, I gave it an 87/100.


2nd place: Sunspark

Comments: Awesome job, I have to say that it's better than the one you entered last time.

Improvements: Grammar, spelling, conventions. Need I say more? Okay, story-wise: It was good, but needs more detail.

Overall Opinion/Score: I love the creativeness of the names you used! Your score has to be 72/100.


3rd place: Ted, the imaginary Contestant

BLAH


Please ask for prizes through comments. Next time, please enter, all members. Razz

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Re: Results!

Post by Fawnleaf on Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:12 am

sweet!

i agree, i do need to put in more intresting stuuf!

thanks for d feedback

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Post by Fawnleaf on Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:18 am

in the intro u said:
EVERYONE WHO ENTERS GETS ONE LINE ART REQUEST

1st Place: 2 fully colored art requests, 1 Line art request (Not including the everyone who enters part) , 100 Experience Points, can control ONE OF MY CATS AT A TIME in my RPG, but you can't make me do bad things without my permission.

2nd: 1 fully colored art request, 1 line art request, 75 Experience Points.


wat are the line and fully colered arts? iv'e already added the points to me and sunny

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Post by Ravenkit on Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:17 pm

Lineart: not colored, not shaded.

Colored: Fully colored.

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Post by Fawnleaf on Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:32 pm

ohhhh..... the line is outline got it

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Post by Ravenkit on Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:19 pm

Yup. And you should request your art now. Alert Sunspark to do that, too.

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Re: Results!

Post by Sunspark on Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:40 am

good job. Thank Ravenkit!
*behind back but everyone can hear* I lost... again. I proble always will
oh are you still there!

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Post by Fawnleaf on Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:55 am

nice.

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Post by Fawnleaf on Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:57 am

i-really-dk about what i want

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Post by Ravenkit on Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:36 pm

Meh, you can think about it.No real time limit, I have my kindle everywhere.

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Post by Fawnleaf on Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:36 pm

kk

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Re: Results!

Post by Sunspark on Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:32 am

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