Homemy EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
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my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Sunspark Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:14 am
Summershine padded towards the river that bordered her
territory. She dipped her head to get a drink. It had been a long greenleaf and
it was finally starting to become leaf fall. Summershine felt another
presence on the other side of the river.
She lifted her silky tan head to see Autumnripple of Thunderclan. A strong
red,orange,and black tortoiseshell tom. He was staring hazily at her. She
suddenly felt as though she was being lifted off of the ground only the sound
of a twig cracking behind her snapped her back to reality. She turned and saw
Leafpelt her clan deputy. She quickly dipped her head and said
"Leafpelt, I was about to get some moss and cover it in water for the
elders but I saw Autumnripple and I questioned him till he left."
Leapelt just stared at her then motioned with his tail.
Autumnripple quickly ran back to camp when he saw Leafpelt. When he
returned with no prey he sheepishly walk towards Lakeshine his sister. He
looked at the vole she was eating and sighed.
"you want to share," she said pushing it towards him.
Autumnripple just shook his head and said "Forgot to catch prey while I
was out."
Lakeshine just shook
her head.
"What where you doing this time," she asked.
Autumnripple just stared hazily out onto the clearing.
Lakeshine gasped.
She got up and stared at him.
"you got to stop, "she scolded.
Summershine walk quietly behind leafpelt. She hung her head but she heard a voice in it
saying
"2 shall break
the code to be together but when they do they shall save the clans."
Summershine shot her head up.
"what did you say," she said eyeing Leafpelt.
"nothing," she answered.
Summershine still look suspicious but she walked on
muttering to herself.
When they arrived at the camp Wetpaw shot strait up to her.
"can we go to hunting practice, but wait battling is so
much better, but wait i LOVE patrolling, but...,"she said walking off to
argue with herself.
Lionfoot walk over to
her with a giant carp.
"wow did you catch that," she asked her brother?
"yup, almost fell in to," he proudly stated.
"Celticstar want to see you," said leafpelt who
had been listening.
Summershine took a deep breath then walked in.
Autumnripple walked away from his sister to the dirtplace.
He snuck out and went to the river where he had seen the other cat.
"I wish I could talk to her without her being
suspicious," he muttered.
He took a look at the river.
"what where you doing that close to the border,"
Celticstar asked camly
Summershine suddenly felt like she hadn't been near the
river just to get a drink, she had wanted to see Autumnripple! A few weeks ago
she had seen him there. The sun shining on his fur. He look beautiful, and
today she had wanted to see him again.
"um," she said trying to think of a lie "I
was looking for moss the soak in water
for the elders."
Celticstar narrowed her eyes suspiciously. She turned
around and picked up some moss. When she
turned back she said
"take this and bring back the water before the sun
sets."
Summershine picked up the moss dipped her head and left.
Autumnripple decided he wanted to learn how to swim. So he
set one paw in then the other. Then he jumped right on in! Suddenly he couldn't
breathe.
"you've really
done it this time, THUNDERCLAN DOESN'T SWIM," he though angrily. He
felt darkness coming when he saw another cat jump in the water. Then it was all
black.
Summershine grabbed the cat by the scruff and swam to the
other side. When she got there she set him down and looked at him.
"frog-brain, he
doesn't know how to swim," she thought staring at the unmoving body.
Suddenly she heard a growl. She looked up and saw Lakeshine Autumnripple's sister. She cautiously stepped away. She
heard the voice again: 2 shall break the
code to be together but when they do they shall save the clans. She closed
her eyes and when she opened them Lakeshine had jumped up and was preparing to
fight her. Lakeshine jumped on her back and scraped as hard as she could.
Summershine tried to fight back but the Thunderclan cat was just to strong and
she let herself collapse underneath her weight.
Darkness lots of
darkness then she saw a brown tabby tom come into the light saying
"2 shall break the code to be together but when they do
they shall save the clans.
territory. She dipped her head to get a drink. It had been a long greenleaf and
it was finally starting to become leaf fall. Summershine felt another
presence on the other side of the river.
She lifted her silky tan head to see Autumnripple of Thunderclan. A strong
red,orange,and black tortoiseshell tom. He was staring hazily at her. She
suddenly felt as though she was being lifted off of the ground only the sound
of a twig cracking behind her snapped her back to reality. She turned and saw
Leafpelt her clan deputy. She quickly dipped her head and said
"Leafpelt, I was about to get some moss and cover it in water for the
elders but I saw Autumnripple and I questioned him till he left."
Leapelt just stared at her then motioned with his tail.
Autumnripple quickly ran back to camp when he saw Leafpelt. When he
returned with no prey he sheepishly walk towards Lakeshine his sister. He
looked at the vole she was eating and sighed.
"you want to share," she said pushing it towards him.
Autumnripple just shook his head and said "Forgot to catch prey while I
was out."
Lakeshine just shook
her head.
"What where you doing this time," she asked.
Autumnripple just stared hazily out onto the clearing.
Lakeshine gasped.
She got up and stared at him.
"you got to stop, "she scolded.
Summershine walk quietly behind leafpelt. She hung her head but she heard a voice in it
saying
"2 shall break
the code to be together but when they do they shall save the clans."
Summershine shot her head up.
"what did you say," she said eyeing Leafpelt.
"nothing," she answered.
Summershine still look suspicious but she walked on
muttering to herself.
When they arrived at the camp Wetpaw shot strait up to her.
"can we go to hunting practice, but wait battling is so
much better, but wait i LOVE patrolling, but...,"she said walking off to
argue with herself.
Lionfoot walk over to
her with a giant carp.
"wow did you catch that," she asked her brother?
"yup, almost fell in to," he proudly stated.
"Celticstar want to see you," said leafpelt who
had been listening.
Summershine took a deep breath then walked in.
Autumnripple walked away from his sister to the dirtplace.
He snuck out and went to the river where he had seen the other cat.
"I wish I could talk to her without her being
suspicious," he muttered.
He took a look at the river.
"what where you doing that close to the border,"
Celticstar asked camly
Summershine suddenly felt like she hadn't been near the
river just to get a drink, she had wanted to see Autumnripple! A few weeks ago
she had seen him there. The sun shining on his fur. He look beautiful, and
today she had wanted to see him again.
"um," she said trying to think of a lie "I
was looking for moss the soak in water
for the elders."
Celticstar narrowed her eyes suspiciously. She turned
around and picked up some moss. When she
turned back she said
"take this and bring back the water before the sun
sets."
Summershine picked up the moss dipped her head and left.
Autumnripple decided he wanted to learn how to swim. So he
set one paw in then the other. Then he jumped right on in! Suddenly he couldn't
breathe.
"you've really
done it this time, THUNDERCLAN DOESN'T SWIM," he though angrily. He
felt darkness coming when he saw another cat jump in the water. Then it was all
black.
Summershine grabbed the cat by the scruff and swam to the
other side. When she got there she set him down and looked at him.
"frog-brain, he
doesn't know how to swim," she thought staring at the unmoving body.
Suddenly she heard a growl. She looked up and saw Lakeshine Autumnripple's sister. She cautiously stepped away. She
heard the voice again: 2 shall break the
code to be together but when they do they shall save the clans. She closed
her eyes and when she opened them Lakeshine had jumped up and was preparing to
fight her. Lakeshine jumped on her back and scraped as hard as she could.
Summershine tried to fight back but the Thunderclan cat was just to strong and
she let herself collapse underneath her weight.
Darkness lots of
darkness then she saw a brown tabby tom come into the light saying
"2 shall break the code to be together but when they do
they shall save the clans.
Last edited by Fawnleaf on Mon Jun 18, 2012 12:50 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : adding poll)
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Sunspark Mon Jun 18, 2012 9:16 am
Hi guys hope you like my story i spent a long time on it and Good luck to Fawn and sorry your not going to win. P.S Fawn will you make me a poll?
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Fawnleaf Mon Jun 18, 2012 12:42 pm
1st I'm sorry ur not going to win,
2nd u make the poll, but i can do it if u want
3rd ur story is okay.... but mines better (just saying)
2nd u make the poll, but i can do it if u want
3rd ur story is okay.... but mines better (just saying)
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Sunspark Mon Jun 18, 2012 3:01 pm
you make me a poll i don't know how
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Fawnleaf Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:47 pm
i DID u idiot
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Darkflash Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:52 am
o i hate you
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Fawnleaf Tue Jun 19, 2012 10:30 am
wat d heck? sunspark, did u log in as him?
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Heatherfrost Thu Jun 21, 2012 2:52 pm
this is a really good show XD
its fun watching you guys argue
its fun watching you guys argue
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Re: my EPIC story titled : Summershine and Autumnripple
by Fawnleaf Fri Jun 22, 2012 10:32 am
again i am funny
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