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Post by Fawnleaf on Mon Apr 02, 2012 6:29 pm

How I graded:


Grading
Rachel:

Sunspark and Arrowpaw
Camille:

(No Title)

Ravenkit
Max points given
Mystery



1



9



10 pts.
Want to read rest of book/story



22



25



30 pts.
Warrior-ness



8



7



10 pts.
Creativity



24



23



30 pts.
Secret/surprise Factor



2



9



10 pts.
Well written



8



10



10 pts.
Total



65




83



100
Comments
Liked 1st part but the very end was confusing. No transition between time.
Great idea and written well. GIVE ME MORE! maybe more hints?



overall thoughts
As you have seen our member RAVENKIT has won!!!!!!!! Good job to Sunspark and Ravenkit!!!!!!!!!!! [oh and spottedfeather, please particapate next time] Very Happy

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Post by Heatherfrost on Tue Apr 03, 2012 4:50 pm

good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D


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Post by Ravenkit on Tue Apr 03, 2012 4:54 pm

I can give you next page...

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Post by Ravenkit on Tue Apr 03, 2012 5:06 pm

I agree... Sunspark and Arrowpaw had more elements of Warriors than mine.

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Post by Fawnleaf on Sun Apr 08, 2012 3:38 pm

I hope everyone agrees w/ d way i judged and who won. I thought both were cool and interesting! What a Face it was hard 2 decide

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Post by Heatherfrost on Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:07 pm

ya both of your stories were wonderful!!!Very Happy

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Post by Fawnleaf on Wed Apr 11, 2012 5:19 pm

thx 4 getting my difficulties

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Post by Sunspark on Tue May 15, 2012 6:11 pm

i totally get what ur saying Fawnstar! it is ok! Razz

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Post by Fawnleaf on Fri May 18, 2012 5:58 pm

[quoteing ravenkit here] yup yup!

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Mad at clare STILL

Post by Sunspark on Wed May 23, 2012 7:25 am

No i do not understand why clare thinks mystery was a bigger part and i did not type i understand!

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Post by Fawnleaf on Wed May 23, 2012 9:03 pm

there needa to be a plot and mystery is a part of plot. jeez! I WAS JUDGING NOT YOU! speaking of which, can someone else judge the next one? I want to enter! you don't have to use the same rubric.

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Post by Ravenkit on Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:09 pm

Me judge?

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Post by Fawnleaf on Wed Jun 06, 2012 8:33 am

sure! besides ur a shoe-in [no offence to anyone!!!!! im just says shes really good!] *to myself: OH YAH IM DOIN IT, OH YAH!!!!!!!!!*

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Post by Ravenkit on Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:10 pm

Yayay!

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Post by Fawnleaf on Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:31 pm

Now i join in the next one yayay!

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